This is a rough outline we jotted down before starting on the scrpit.

• Starts off, camera moving through the house, heading upstairs. Titles show up around house.
• Get to bedroom, see dave in bed tossing and turning. Picture of him and Ellie on bedside table.
• In black and white (this a dream) Dreamdave at a gravestone lying flowes by grave. There is a picture of Ellie also by this grave.
• Dreamdave closes his eyes, and we hear a car screeching.
• Dreamdave looks up off camera. We don't see what he's looking at.
• Back in bedroom Dave tosses and turns.
• Dreamdave sees creepy Ellie standing in the distance under arch.In seconds she's gone again.
• Dreamdave gets up to go to where Creepy Ellie was, and she appears behind him. This is when the audience get a proper look at her, all straggly and creepy and dead.
• Dreamdave turns to run through the graveyard, not looking back.
• THIS SECTION IS LOTS OF FAST CUTS:
• Dave in bed tosses and turns more vigourously than before.
• We see a car zoom down a road.
• Dreamdave keeps running
• We see a ball bounce onto the road.
• Dave in bed tosses and turns.
• Dreamdave stumbles and falls over.
• We see normal Ellie, walking into the middle of the road to pick up the ball. The car is seen in the distance.
• Creepy Ellie stands over Dreamdave. Mute. Expresionless.
• We see car come closer to normal Ellie.
• As Dave jerks awake in bed, we hear the echo of a car screeching.

Thats it at the moment. We'll put up the finsished script before Friday.

Matt And Ewan.